【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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( c9 ~& J/ h: W/ c# |我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ v+ d% o# g' q9 D6 m  HFrom the first moment we met,
. u/ u- [" a, E( |: `" TI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
- s6 d# `6 c4 H8 S1 m7 [( {But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 o' i) C. U/ U' N2 zIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( `4 y( U, n+ K# a! a( h6 m( r/ ^9 @Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 g( P4 V' n) R2 EBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. S$ L" J* x; \( R5 c: o# A) JIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 I: Y1 ]4 F2 W; d+ r7 s9 JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 M1 F/ Q$ A, y) b9 `. p( r" ?Entrust my love within your heart
+ s; u+ l, e" F3 {Love… just the word love
) T) ^. U  i: s. {4 D$ @Why is it so difficult to express?
: q/ i- ?8 D! B& @% GI want to confess that I love you,
$ p# Z4 p4 j3 l7 k# {But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) z- r* P3 P3 W* J- o, V8 GIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% H: `1 ^/ a6 s9 B: M% r; \Can I entrust it to you?
# I1 p: E5 ^+ {9 z+ c, m0 j, MEntrust my love within your heart
/ B. u1 W2 C! G+ A  MCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 d" h" ]  b4 J7 j1 c1 _<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
5 {- q; {4 ^) p0 ?7 x8 i0 s7 f<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
- E" M. K, W$ J% ^. b9 z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& i9 w+ G6 b7 u<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# g8 r) ?* P5 y9 e' y+ u1 l<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 b, ]5 N8 C$ o2 H( W$ {& O2 u<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. m' S+ G2 Y3 x<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ A: \% n1 A4 `. [0 \8 U<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 h% I0 N5 ?5 j# @" T<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( P4 l& Y4 J5 b  O<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 `% g, ^+ X1 A<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
- w7 s% N" v8 V<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 w/ m$ E2 N2 t# |- L3 O<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ d. _( L' f% {* @<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. o% i4 k8 l; t5 f<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! R% Y+ O, k8 e& {8 n" S% t. d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" T4 P) A9 [0 K  h<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- x' i. I- u' M" ^% X- k" O3 F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ e, k, S$ N. N% z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 ~7 ?. o- b& \- p! i/ Z( y5 }9 ?<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! o# c9 _) m' E% `' x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ i! I1 _. Q" f0 Q) r* J<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
9 {7 |$ q9 W$ L9 {<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) m% c" L9 q$ T5 B( t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 P2 T" K+ C7 L! ]3 b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* Q( }% C- \: _  j0 d; }9 t3 @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 Y9 h1 g) A: G3 F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 s/ M, Y& D. L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, Y- n! O* L" i" e. q" o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. |6 H$ W$ S6 R% }7 _2 K: d3 z这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 [* M/ G* Q5 z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>