【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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, S2 [2 h8 D$ n0 r我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- h9 G! A' w2 M7 a6 c: ]) w- R1 P( iFrom the first moment we met,
) m( Z/ A; K3 C& ?I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
; E$ {/ q0 W: ]& Z+ w) _1 WBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
. c0 M9 G: e- N' V+ X' IWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 E' N. o& i4 h- t* ?" pBut I never did
' |/ n& L4 ^% W' Q# v9 ^! z# K( ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 G7 }# O- Z, b6 E7 d7 X6 L  eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! u8 }% ^2 J2 h  Q& p" \! h2 NCan I entrust it to you?
' a+ u2 o% l" `' f8 e  PEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
0 B$ S  u; A7 y' `' XWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  v1 o8 j8 g. g5 K: tBut I never did
" ]8 V1 g2 b) sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
5 o( X. w3 \' XI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 K$ s/ t& J+ \/ h  A  I% ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 S) H  q6 Q0 f. d' h: e7 fCan I entrust it to you?
( {: R  e0 L/ R% v8 R* o% [  PEntrust my love within your heart

2 ~7 V1 N5 B( P[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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+ c2 R% @& e" k' g8 a" p7 V<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ R! N: y, e, B& [1 A* O5 q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# \  m5 Z: G+ \" T& ~2 N<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
( Q4 q0 g0 E* ]% r* N) Q2 M$ D<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) m( L9 p2 |9 M+ O. k# Q& X8 w9 U<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 \7 r) w! c, Z+ _: R6 S5 ~" M<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 C" t! ^' [6 `<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 t" H4 I) b3 G$ m<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) }8 a" e( g5 w: t6 D: f, [# `% @<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ m1 a+ o/ p/ j( s' u+ X4 V" z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! e4 g5 d7 a- R0 r, L3 |+ N+ |9 V# j<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. X; u; m, u, w* K* W<P>但我不会</P>
7 T( H: D; @2 K. y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 D, P5 G' A# m: L! k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
/ v+ T  \0 [/ w9 {$ s<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. M* o' t5 K1 p# p* N" t<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 s! l3 ^6 o  }8 N% k4 j) Z; ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 _. d$ @# v1 e+ b9 g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  s8 k8 k9 [8 t5 m! W* P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 a" e5 R, t- s0 B& s( N7 A* k<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 q# }' v( B( v- C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" p' T1 ?- O7 [' w<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" y  a% h5 e& V6 O' Z) D<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
, i. O% |3 M; L* e/ ~9 Q4 Z2 l8 w<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( M, A3 x1 w  ]/ n<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 b5 v' l. b' O, I<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 j- e& Q& }6 ]/ |; R: t  {8 n  t8 M<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 l0 }+ X6 G2 J; h: E7 y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& O- g( \6 ~7 ]/ J. q1 z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) }6 G' o; ~, R* Z( q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' H! A  H5 N8 i) V1 u/ J<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
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4 `- S# E* s" R% }$ n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 j6 [# t7 ~( T  X. Z' q$ Z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>