【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
/ W$ W# ~! ?  O* s) c) hBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" F% a; O' |2 I4 e9 ~: i& [/ M/ QIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
1 I/ j. t& W& m4 W% cWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 _" c8 k6 R9 Q  A* T, bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ A1 a5 p  N3 y! g/ k8 V5 qIf today isn’t too late,
' v6 h3 }' ~: RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# f* i/ F  O' ?+ O4 SCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 k8 ^& J5 E9 }5 h4 J  _- }Love… just the word love
& V* o5 m3 i. Z$ }! T$ k) X: |9 Q" SWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 j8 v8 ^3 j& |, @& YI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* a4 }3 S, J$ n# \* s: DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& M" \4 C! Z4 ^" |- MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. V1 U% G! v- G1 |8 Q; {  hCan I entrust it to you?
0 q- e, y9 W8 J3 b; sEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( @' i! f& l" K2 \. S<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 U' \8 \7 j9 o* M# Z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ w1 C8 x2 y; s; J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ Q- r* H3 T" ^1 I+ A% ~<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! `, `& `7 r. o( t' P: e; \& J<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; ^- {# l. b/ e# M<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, O3 N4 T% ~+ a0 Z8 }" d$ P$ F. H<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ W9 k1 F9 C7 d! h# J( s: d/ P<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ p, x8 a# ]4 L, G! y  k& W<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 w4 G2 B, x$ {0 X! Z7 a, l<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 I* T5 q* z' K; A; j<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 G5 ^8 d) X) g; n* v' r<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ o! W5 n; j4 o; V& B& P<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! j+ O. N  O0 x' t! m/ A3 C7 U<P>但我不会</P>
! g( }# `2 j' {<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: o: f, _& c; t' g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 q0 }8 U+ r# Q2 h# i5 I" S5 t& c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. m% g& m# ^3 O" {: J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; g, S( p, ]/ T9 U$ f. H<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. P4 u$ C; G- b9 c+ V2 o+ ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! z! {: U5 u2 i7 T<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ x1 A4 F: |! \9 }9 F<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 [6 O3 |4 \2 O& c<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
9 p/ m  \9 e+ V% J+ J8 X<P>但我不会 </P>
+ J0 C5 B; b' X% U<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ t0 F3 `: j+ n' ?% p+ _* Z# |<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- l7 T, `- R& [7 u, V<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# ~) A4 K. W( u1 y' S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ W; M  {$ X# q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. l; O7 r& B; p$ @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ [% r* G* U: d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 G; i5 H0 t: p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( \. P3 q7 b3 ~) ^<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
. K" c6 N3 x6 m% A' b: s0 p<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

; G4 L" M0 d" _0 K$ R这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 j0 w& J* P& `# V+ y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>