【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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4 O4 f( ?1 @4 a1 d- {  R" `<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODYzNzI=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
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; U! a( V/ K4 b9 u我另将歌词附在此。
+ C6 u" _' L! `% sThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 \+ D5 A2 h8 sFrom the first moment we met,
+ o  A. I9 d  V9 u, ^I already loved you with all my heart
2 C; O% u" L0 p6 Y% v* vWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
: p& [9 M, m9 U3 |3 h5 F9 lIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: m& V$ M0 ^7 X- kI would probably know how you feel
' h6 L  U* {& i" G! C9 dLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% E: D" ]0 J& T* @1 OBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' e8 Y6 v8 M# h5 a8 u  }2 X  q' zIf today isn’t too late,
7 Z2 q% }$ f1 qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 O  q# |. z2 DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; M. x. N6 ]( C# e' n: kLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 d3 P+ x! k) b3 Q1 i; B7 NBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 v$ P* f) @% c& SIf today isn’t too late,
3 Z8 `! n# o9 Y5 cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" o3 C3 H/ p: n7 s" B4 qI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 w3 q2 @* [% I) J7 @6 A* `  w2 D) SEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
9 y, E7 L& C+ y9 i% ?  o* j9 [4 qEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 Q# r7 b0 F. r<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% r! x( b6 D' A4 `<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ z+ W) G- G$ A0 V, D& T1 @<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 e: S7 u* M, w$ v3 |<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ A1 w1 @, [) v+ l9 Z$ ]' {8 }<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ |6 a0 `# D  Z  F# V# }<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) ~! D/ `; d; p  N: a) I<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
' _- ~" a8 e2 ^& i" v" x<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; d5 H' j3 K3 C9 ~<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- I8 m- P. v  B<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- r7 C" o. _" G, T: u3 F% T<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
+ ]2 W, l1 n# `* B$ K/ ]<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 e3 t4 V9 m+ x2 T<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 g+ Y6 N0 P# V0 y' a# L<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: L6 k# V7 f. \+ U3 C<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
  V1 y: g& A% X4 Z/ g<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& `3 Q  ?( D# O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ E3 [1 L. G8 I$ f2 U" t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( n; `* E* W; k3 o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 s. G7 @2 ^. \3 v9 T2 P& A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" m% ~% r% d/ Q/ H1 Y5 K8 H<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: ?) I4 m% W! C$ [$ v7 L, q# `<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% y5 J( Q# V) ~! h7 I7 c<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& W& x8 g" O  P# i) Q1 j<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
! `3 r9 y0 d# v+ P$ K2 l! U<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 ~( P% S1 _# z6 a, t+ ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, T4 U$ M5 i, d6 p4 |/ q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' G1 e; t6 r2 T) w0 k' f+ X. z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" O4 S" ~( F6 }( T, t( y' s/ V, B<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: B" j5 E2 G, j" D; [: d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 Z8 @9 t# [! V$ y3 d, F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

) g: M& g0 B. _% H 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. n# |) k8 E7 Q. N9 N3 Y9 O这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>