【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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5 R! X6 ^* P. b我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 g% v, a1 E4 A+ e( H- Y3 J8 @& ]- vThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 X4 Z% V) [/ t/ h% N; rFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
. _! X" Q8 m- p) W& Z5 Q" @$ I( |We meet and talk everyday,
2 E, z. }: q# n0 K0 H4 X& J% yBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
! m: |, W2 _$ c+ d* vLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 M$ u  @5 {! {- U* y, L; WBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 M2 ~  X9 u, r8 r% T) J3 r4 FIf today isn’t too late,
9 _: b# l5 q# C4 [. @+ e) jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 ~9 O- f/ v, e# @! Z" Q( {Love… just the word love
, s0 E: p. k8 J8 ^Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 b, e. |1 _# f. F. c6 [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ S& F+ z$ X2 ^- x0 C1 y. Q: v$ AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' x3 \7 Z5 P& v# z3 O. {Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: m1 a: ]- i, n: t" V, x) d: oCan I entrust it to you?
; N( _0 e/ g& v  O2 l2 x% N+ eEntrust my love within your heart
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4 w1 ~. A' M) d[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ h) i% p$ M2 ?% g2 c; ^<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 j5 `+ A- H) z8 P<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 R, e" c- o4 e8 ~1 {<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& ?6 U$ [8 q7 U, `/ X/ S<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
6 v  t5 x' \4 D4 }; e+ \<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ M/ A/ S/ _/ s  G" W$ W<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; v$ @% v" u& N+ e- o5 }: W8 V+ F6 O<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 ~+ p5 k* g" G% g% o<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ q/ w+ H8 W- N1 t<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 @% c( T, J0 F. Q( ]& G<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 ^9 ~/ C7 \; ^! m<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  W$ U7 S1 j! d0 D  Q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" S3 v7 k+ v0 G: A& H# O<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! U4 |% @: n8 h4 `7 q1 N( B( E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- A; g" g9 o: O* P+ z+ z# u* A<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 h$ M9 r  j3 G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; N3 [, `( n. ~1 d6 u. R& d1 ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 O9 Z9 ^2 R. _% x5 {% B: @( o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 G$ o6 i( d! n& [& l<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
; w9 _$ a( g1 O<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, D# y9 ^1 q9 [$ e& `( ^: v<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. E1 z# t( @7 s2 M<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
* P7 j8 O0 d* t8 t: S2 Q) k<P>但我不会 </P>
, O% |/ K2 F# N& d( ]3 g2 `<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. p' V+ k' l0 Y<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 O( U% x+ W1 z3 ]2 _+ [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 `8 g3 c5 u: {& ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 v! M, F3 U, |# B2 a" T- p2 O( X<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! H* A, k7 e: C# h0 F/ Z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 b4 }, B1 S: Y4 n! z% [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
$ A# z* a2 T+ Z# S7 t4 P0 j9 S<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
& E6 Z; _. H% @. X; U9 I, r<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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$ r; _4 Y' d& }9 ]这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ d: p+ |: e4 w( r4 ^<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>