【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 A( N5 }" K$ F$ h* UFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
% N9 E  z! C# U( ^) y0 b; w' R& |But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
! a- F$ F% C* v( Q5 GWhy is it so difficult to express?
% W- |/ U/ R4 p+ s' ^I want to confess that I love you,
" L# b  G1 b$ }. x: ZBut I never did
2 {7 M9 y$ v8 S. w- sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" ]8 Z# Z/ `& H2 r' w7 q! UCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
$ a/ t/ h) K3 p1 JWhy is it so difficult to express?
% @6 p  J; d4 t) r1 ]4 v$ _I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ e& e6 {6 B: j6 c7 t- S3 ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 F; j3 ~: S( X& iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) ^0 S, e1 H( e- ?* @( a! D+ U) dCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

. D9 N( p# C- |4 g  v! a<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 ]9 F! [  k1 p: _$ E<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 M" G* F. Y5 K- A- \3 K' g6 ~<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ [) M/ G- C0 N7 ^* U# i7 J, [<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! w' s. y0 u( }: }* Y! N<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 F' d9 W+ v; ^, P- t4 R<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 l% P4 e1 w. X! G* t/ q$ P( p<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
- d+ {! x. y( S+ U) }. |<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
! r+ t! {% M- ^<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- e' O6 y/ g" o<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 L' D5 K1 \7 B<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ Q* s( R* j8 \: o) o1 Q<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! k; Z6 V( a( s& S- x) `8 O<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
+ @4 _& H( y) J! _+ N) _<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& L  n( J/ u: g! J1 Z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ t5 e0 I/ P* a" A7 t<P>但我不会</P>
5 ~" S( z7 H: x4 m& U# ^9 Z! h/ P<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* \! V/ W& p3 |0 u8 R- m<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 g0 C0 a+ }5 J. n' K; ^0 B4 |, V<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ I4 a$ s, c& ]  K( V<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ Q! ~# c0 Y: S$ {/ o<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 X: C# |& g$ ?, l) N<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 ?/ I0 c% N& z1 I<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* r. z9 D. u+ c( d8 H" E( k<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 f: |& a& j8 {) s! B) b2 m# r- q<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' M, S1 e+ s1 {. n<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: ]: U$ [  b$ B$ X$ F$ {% @2 F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, s7 v- f6 K3 ?/ X( w5 Y2 F: b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ c( L6 u3 q# i1 z  d; ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: d1 I- E6 @1 v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( z+ f4 [) @2 e5 K/ q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ G9 M0 m1 Y" W6 M- Y" m7 w这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 o" Y# m1 d/ K% o$ s* w3 T  l<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ b3 {8 k( m$ V<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>