【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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0 _' W2 u. N4 D- u我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
6 Y5 q1 n" {. o# f# |That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 x  b" {! q" DFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! ~4 Y2 y/ w* WI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) E4 ~. `5 [7 q# Y! ~But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 Y: M9 v4 }* W0 gIf today isn’t too late,
: T1 o2 e2 Z- O' _# C4 E. _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 Y" d6 I  P+ ?$ REntrust my love within your heart
- E' a  P: ^6 S! [: s* FLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
+ _! A; E( b  E. t5 sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% b3 w& I' _/ bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 s3 s3 q! V+ M$ DCan I entrust it to you?
" s/ T8 s* q! e% l9 NEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
' ?3 y9 l' C2 Q$ f/ V( Z  dEntrust my love within your heart

5 B3 r& j  I2 x7 B[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( C3 n# J' L& m8 Z0 ^<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 J3 P, }& o% S. x( }4 {<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 {& k* L4 O: i) V4 e  E<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, K3 t3 x9 M1 _' P! g3 U<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, x" i* D' J' c3 a; l$ s% ?$ f& ]- s<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ F% f; Y/ Q- N3 L9 W$ Q<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ u3 @4 G3 ~- b8 q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. h7 A: W- Y9 ?+ M<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 _5 }$ R0 T3 b. V<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ |7 a* s& `. T<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* |0 T2 Q& q) M- @<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. l+ k) S# k  K8 s/ s& T% C3 U, h<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 Z2 U' j, B* w# A& t, X! E: h<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 M$ H7 Y' U2 }, r2 g<P>但我不会</P>
1 H0 ~: N% c* g. O  k<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( h4 p3 n7 A6 R0 y) J- j<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 N( J  }$ a" y. O. w8 N' `0 v<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ g4 a0 i% w  H) ]4 u; ]* U6 t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# v1 a& T/ a5 p; l, u# z( X<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) W! f: I4 {0 g& i( j/ G8 ?! h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 U5 @# z' d4 W9 n/ V3 Z<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; Q3 |6 W( l9 H1 p<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
3 N& N9 R6 c6 b5 p3 F4 x! _<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 x7 x" }5 w$ G<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! L2 \  G: N: c8 ?9 Y<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! ~3 Q0 m* [5 [) ^% ]* t, `1 ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; J8 s5 j9 `& r2 W# M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. K) p7 E! P! W  \6 K7 N<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 B; L, `7 J7 w' }<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 M+ {/ p2 Y; c# N; G. T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& M, y+ z$ \+ g( _3 h# r, y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ R" e! j  w1 L) _0 x/ Z/ _<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
( l& _$ p$ f% w+ s) A" f% p: t<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& y6 H, \6 E+ ~. R, H5 ~2 l9 w<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>