【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
7 }7 t' `! A/ ?9 O0 AI already loved you with all my heart
7 Q& i5 Z$ f0 ?$ IWe meet and talk everyday,
9 D8 i( B2 h0 G( F& eBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 J8 B" Z& A; L  s  b3 wIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- ~( _# g. s. R1 AI would probably know how you feel
. ]4 I+ A2 n  w# PLove… just the word love
: T' v+ g0 e+ bWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 P, F" j8 `' k/ l" d2 i) z# F+ a& M  kBut I never did
' N) m: q3 b- N3 ~' E1 X5 ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* V9 H( I5 T9 t3 V) jIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 J% p1 U6 d7 }8 N. a' s$ |% M/ GEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
, P/ Q5 l7 N( L& {Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 v8 w2 i3 {1 UBut I never did
: V9 P: }/ _6 }) y/ C8 tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: A# V8 T% o$ _6 v" R5 q- PIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- k6 Y$ i' d: D/ M6 o2 t* cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

  Y- ?, @" P5 C/ g0 K) z" `! ~[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ b9 `- n2 Z2 r2 C- n; [8 F<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 `  g9 _) i! ]; p<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 C  \1 u$ c& L<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 a0 H& F5 ^- y! }$ w5 k2 i<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
! ], [. E6 c9 {. V% Z0 `<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 \! R. }: ^8 g$ H- |<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. y6 D- @$ W3 T! ?<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 m; s" |" E' a6 c& }1 ^<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# e' x, y& @* z* U# a# S7 P<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ j6 ]: G; [$ |# k' B<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! T, Z. Y+ c! D. K8 _<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
6 K" E1 b& n7 i+ B+ R<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 n. j$ ^. s9 d& T' [<P>但我不会</P>
, Q/ q. b9 ?' K7 T, q' G<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 J9 f, Q- v4 k5 Q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 w* o# n% T! W/ w! W: w$ n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 I' c3 Q- A7 J3 X- W<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
4 b# O2 W7 i4 i2 J- m<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ H' p' T! ]6 W+ B, [! `8 p<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ x# {/ @8 W" ^4 y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ d* ]0 U' _2 e& _# ]! X2 b; ~; E0 R/ ?<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
! i# z' P( S7 f& a<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ ?8 b" \% b! \  w& ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 F3 H" t8 r2 K# A: M3 n# t! b<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- L, H+ G2 }# P# I" e: c- X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 N+ v) B' t5 k/ H0 K+ p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* f# b5 r; l" F- ^2 D) j<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# N1 p+ d! w: _  Y" G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- C- r9 @4 M( M2 n' S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( a  A" E) v1 v- [- V' H9 u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ E# T  ~8 L' A) K- _; v* a, x' g$ G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, y4 j8 \! u! w" P8 `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( T2 I3 ^6 m7 f7 b. f3 D<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

9 _4 k5 [- U) Q- f; l0 r& ~3 l; X这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

8 s! a) _& H, N% p2 m# X这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& X4 a: y, l% t; c+ e<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>