【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
% T6 l2 X/ a4 X+ NThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 J% @. e$ e' u3 Q+ i6 G9 e" gThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
0 x/ O1 I  u+ N* S$ II already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
% q* m- b3 j( H+ x% J- GBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
7 X; D6 J2 a$ M* d( I: v8 y! T) eWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 u$ g+ o. m0 h% ^" z# T8 xBut I never did
/ H2 R; C/ ?5 d/ F* _, ~* ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 g3 Y  w8 B; ]$ e* n# l2 ]/ eIf today isn’t too late,
4 Z9 D  M0 e; S3 B2 c+ j  ?+ O1 V& T. rI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 P- ?$ @* H( X# tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
0 `+ z# D/ \1 c+ g$ ?Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) ~! V# B3 r7 o5 V- RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 @! U9 v3 K* j3 \4 S. c4 xCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
) `5 Z: W7 s* s( p9 xEntrust my love within your heart
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3 i- c& k7 M2 M( X# e4 _[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  a; @0 ?( Y" i<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! I& _+ D! \" `9 w! W$ {4 h( v<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" p5 s$ i2 \. j/ J, [! I: j<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, ^) p& }% h0 b; e* g& R( ]<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ q- ]( l' h3 n8 M* V9 g<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 L5 ^1 O4 K. w5 p' q<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, L1 |& i+ Z* U<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 b( s( D0 A9 a& y: j<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% p# n8 ]8 i, u! d: U2 k<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 c) Q. i  R/ e, D8 ?! K, y<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& Y+ q! e- ], u- ~& Z, I3 @<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 [# |' m  Q5 V- S9 `! E7 L9 c<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 u4 u, P/ n6 J! f" N- U6 M<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' ?1 V) t6 |& w" w  h% x& q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: V/ y. T, r% D1 Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 C, Q; p1 o- l<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& X( J0 u& n# \1 a/ ^/ X- K2 Y% U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( e! ~' B; O& I) y1 g. {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( t. _; I! @* p/ ]- u) a<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ v7 d: C/ R* L/ x7 P/ M, e) z- b<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& k, P6 D* g5 n: N+ B. A3 l1 _<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 l% i0 w6 I- p! M3 f<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* J$ u- S. N: E8 A6 A2 V& I8 B<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 j' }9 Y# f: b& L# r<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ c% v, a( e+ W* e<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
* j, h8 i0 Q) n$ d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) {+ J, G+ H! ^+ G) H) @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; o  Z, @+ t0 Y( e# k' Q8 A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 X+ e6 ]; w7 e3 X, Q8 n( _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( R' A/ V4 O$ K9 T% f+ I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 I& a2 U  p8 H$ s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" v" H1 U  n9 O; A# o/ R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# {, e1 ~1 `& }<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 C! Z& q( `6 r这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 Y; h9 l2 y* B) L% L<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  c( [" u  W/ g3 t5 T$ G( M<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>