【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
# S6 X, J" g% K" |The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& C5 V. ~9 T% ?" x7 IThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
4 {- V( g) Y# R6 M+ z! |I already loved you with all my heart
/ L5 p* I# W3 y' V8 tWe meet and talk everyday,
# Y: U' Z" S/ OBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ I& p, ?$ r0 e! _0 }- ]If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* _$ M1 X3 P6 sI would probably know how you feel
4 ]; v) c8 ]: @; N; k6 m. TLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# Q# ?( R5 q- v4 _& ]6 kBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* i, b5 M5 t% w8 @, S- jIf today isn’t too late,
  Y3 @( w, P( k1 u( V0 s- R3 t5 DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 H, j0 I; P# z# V6 TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 c7 L, |, a* F. a% gCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ L# H4 A4 h3 ^" ], |- fLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 s/ B9 d% g  K! D& S4 ~+ g. DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ t$ J) x+ }4 s/ xEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
6 [4 T. `# z+ j6 r! U; [: GEntrust my love within your heart
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3 H) N: C5 S& Z- g& T[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- {9 T! x  L- C5 x7 D- Q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* Q3 ^* B5 u% |# Z( G; `2 B<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* s* a6 h  B2 B5 \& T  M<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
7 @" T: J: z- }( s3 _+ A<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ |) f* `7 G7 G5 \<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) U* i0 n0 U% @& I1 M5 Q- {0 ]<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 u4 A0 X/ I2 G3 j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 J4 }  r9 k0 H3 e# [<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 w8 `4 M# F* \# }<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 y. U* N4 c- f<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: v+ u) ~4 q/ {* O& ^5 n<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  j5 P8 e- S4 w9 i7 I) U7 [<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  r9 e: H% e" q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 G9 ^1 U- }9 m) K) h$ E5 h3 S<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" e' l8 R( a8 z$ Z( {<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( x/ q7 g; f3 J; N<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  O# i& d* H, I7 \& Y  ?7 u<P>但我不会</P>
- I% e4 A- M+ c" V( b' e  r. H# S% N6 d<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ A2 Y- H; R7 X% N<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ C0 K& Y8 c" I) l. {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 _9 Z3 n' E8 j5 g/ G<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; ?) r0 Y" _8 v5 F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* K& Y. S/ y8 ?7 L/ l% K$ n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* G/ m9 \' L$ r$ K! l3 ^, I! P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  g) o% M2 I  W; k<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ ?, f: L$ h* i* k: w4 v6 H<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: B9 U# C8 @4 `/ ~) f  L3 V1 b<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 m* b0 k0 g+ Z/ Q, C4 ]& N0 \<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
2 c' I2 t! j3 G* ]<P>但我不会 </P>
+ `0 h5 R9 T4 |" Z% R% j& ?- O9 l<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 `# Q1 t# ~6 Q. G' H  K: R0 }  K<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' |2 m0 @2 q4 h$ `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 W! ]" I/ J( ~& L& z' G8 U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. |1 ?" n3 t4 K8 h! p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  D2 d1 O) m5 w( L9 h- s  y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ u; u8 B* a" n' r# d 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 q: \' _7 v7 M1 C2 o# D2 a- @% A这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ n' B- h8 l9 X. {8 I5 c<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>