【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
' f5 d  \# e8 L, a. nThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# o' V% [5 ?: m! b6 ~4 A! FFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
5 Z$ z, p9 @7 Q% i/ ]6 f+ EBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
7 p& P7 D" I) FI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 \1 ^% J+ ?+ e/ LI want to confess that I love you,
( s. E3 G) T  v+ Z) n* L! N2 wBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
( y. Q9 @) [1 e- s' b- L# h! _Entrust my love within your heart
; r* z: N+ l+ c+ }% u5 sLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% q5 w9 n( s5 p( }1 I& e1 A  {I want to confess that I love you,
6 i( X0 Q2 i7 b% VBut I never did
% |+ b9 O  V7 G2 R7 c7 ]- t' tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 h8 h0 A% q6 f: d- x( XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 q2 P, h, q- ]& s; }: PCan I entrust it to you?
1 k% E; H( T' O1 d8 n5 b( WEntrust my love within your heart
# G+ N- D7 W/ b$ n1 ~1 d0 vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

" ]6 k" s( c" r6 y; x. z[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

7 J! R7 `5 w9 t<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 E: E4 ^) k' ?<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  e5 k! j3 {% ?8 R8 f3 O+ V- V<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
+ z1 o7 b% G2 y* Z& ~<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. i% G7 g0 ~* r1 H8 R, i<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 C) o* E- v' w4 T<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 h1 ~1 g# J2 A" e<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 i' O. g* _- H; c1 v4 q+ w<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 s4 D9 Q4 w+ C' T- d$ o) g1 F# K<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 i$ n3 L8 F1 H6 @; y<P>但我不会</P>
; l! D$ ~  {; t! y7 z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ `- {3 I& V9 o$ K7 u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; t+ h* |# y0 I9 F) W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 d& m" r7 E& ~- t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 y& P2 ^' [' {, q3 B8 H<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' C. u& u5 ~/ V" A1 j% \: r- n<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) o0 [; r5 w% A1 |<P>But I never did </P>
( M  q& i* ?/ Q# T- G3 O- F3 R<P>但我不会 </P>
9 ?6 w3 I2 V2 l$ P! Q6 H+ H" D0 W<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; e) c5 D8 t; x2 {. E<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) Q0 H- E$ t. t; J: G<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ J# ?6 u5 Y5 D<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' l. |1 ^; a# ?" L$ V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ d' u; O/ f6 ?/ @7 `* [3 @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: H4 U5 x$ d2 [+ x- C5 c* [+ [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& u+ l" U; b  z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 f: M# m" k( m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% S& n) F4 ?( r" @/ R9 }6 o<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

; X) R8 r- A& E5 C* E/ W) \! x 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

- L4 }& I) R- y# {+ Q0 {; ?: Q这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 I( e* }; i6 t7 I* g' T<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>