【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
0 d, b" Z# }+ r- g5 u5 B
6 S7 M8 V) l8 t" S
<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODYzNzI=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>


. w/ b7 S$ w2 c1 E  z我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" r5 J9 e, X/ jThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
  T5 `; t! |% D* r  U7 Z9 ULove… just the word love
, k9 {! h$ y7 a# n: X) K" JWhy is it so difficult to express?
) q) S. e# D2 @/ M& ZI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" [+ a/ g# [# ?+ @- u' tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 ?8 P( I+ ]3 H: ?& t" }1 pCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
/ S6 Y$ f' v9 k; l( zLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 m! T0 M$ c4 G( fBut I never did
( ^$ T1 K( R2 r$ oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- k- q& u  s2 N) l" y8 W1 ^I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 {) }- q) @6 X6 \" n+ p/ \; [Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) X" A* u% N( o, wCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# r. T8 C& L) {! b<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
% E+ J* t. b) m1 S- W7 @; B<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ q- L. z4 o) j  r<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 c- o3 x. J+ v2 R<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  ~& ]. W- o; T% e; I<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 v  x$ v$ D) Z7 q# R3 u<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 w0 T  L; T& T; B3 O! H<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! T! n, h$ T# n2 D2 X% @! z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
" G- `# o* N6 ^/ |+ g! `" A<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; Q1 [/ L" P) T1 _<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ d0 S( c. c+ m<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' W4 F( H) t  Q! o0 x<P>但我不会</P>
5 \  z7 p6 X: K8 H7 w8 |& _! ?2 S# p% B<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' i, _. W& k6 n7 I/ w  v" o8 \<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& z; v3 I' f  b: v( ~, I<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# e6 ]- g8 O5 C/ p  {9 ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# I: `1 w4 {! B& A  B4 c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( _+ {3 Q6 Y+ f3 Z, M  s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 a% @) G( B- `# S/ s, _7 l* b, v<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ d% B' s' @( ]) ~1 L# F8 T) v' V<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
9 w# u6 B+ R, n, m<P>但我不会 </P>
7 c1 `+ [9 G; Q1 _& T0 ~) \<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 ]/ T/ H: j  m1 v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& |/ }# ?3 s) r- P" G/ \8 Y7 v9 D<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# ?! W  [# T/ W# t0 U8 n7 e  p* C<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 l, R, V# ?1 |* U$ V0 o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- {7 n( M7 Q3 L, [! x- ?6 l6 H<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 k* |" F9 R; e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 d1 ^& z3 m& E+ C2 H<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
* Q9 a; O8 g9 _4 q2 M9 H8 a<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 ]4 B4 a5 L5 Z9 W' d/ k& P4 S
我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
) N2 K( U4 R0 |4 ]
这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

, l. E9 @# H, T8 x/ p<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
) Y: w; Z( d, k* v* |<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

<P>

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
8 Q3 H' a3 c  X8 ?0 r: J<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>