【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 F$ ~+ P* Z, P9 r7 l* z' V9 {- t8 fThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- Y. X, [0 c4 hFrom the first moment we met,
* }  F( s6 Z  [! S6 x% g3 nI already loved you with all my heart
& |* C  O7 ^- p2 N! e8 rWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! R8 r/ p; x, b: c, aI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; O" U+ n2 w4 X$ W( h% ]But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: I, C3 ^: m  TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% W7 D7 x0 i6 E, cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  l: e# {0 E! Q7 ?7 x% V+ xCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 j: N' D/ b  f) s6 nLove… just the word love
7 F: \) W( f" I6 OWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ A& Y8 r) L9 R, k# @' \I want to confess that I love you,
" U/ M/ ?, _# u- t2 o- R* a0 ZBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ [, k- e/ O% M% ^5 `' y8 l& P5 II don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 f% t7 Q' u. E9 YCan I entrust it to you?
! Q( n# M) Q4 g" B5 CEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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- |9 Y+ I, }4 N$ F; @+ C! [" [[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) ]! j, W: {% h- p! r  Y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# P2 h: e9 f4 {) l! @( J9 T<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 {5 O0 d' S# Y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ e) x7 K" e' H8 m<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" M  m, {9 L  F% P) z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 o  p* G/ B+ u% s<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 Q. V7 d, l) A3 C# \5 O, e<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 \8 F0 G4 x# B. J5 h1 j9 J<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
) e* [" {, w  {' ], |0 ?! f# [, t5 H<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! }0 T/ i: _1 v, W: ~<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 m  n1 l  C( C) w# }3 z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! O0 p# e0 [: S7 t0 @+ v6 i<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 l* Z; o$ N9 F2 o$ p7 A) s$ R+ M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! O! [" X7 U" n' q1 g  B3 ?( u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 P/ Y) X' r( H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 q3 E; ]# z0 U5 V& I$ E/ l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. ^, ^3 U/ K5 m$ P1 H' r  ~" V<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 {/ D4 O7 L2 e3 c" ^7 p' o<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 ?1 p" Y& m2 ^3 R9 j; C: f<P>But I never did </P>
8 J( Q# D4 b5 k0 z" M2 b<P>但我不会 </P>
: y( y( Z" @7 x( D<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# |3 g) N: W4 b<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 J: x! G2 @2 k  Z4 E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 N- P7 Z' T( M% o/ K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 J. ^7 @3 ?& g) U: M8 A<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; i+ O' ]3 d6 @# O3 F8 U) t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 }& C. F9 t' v. W# X% D; j4 L<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! `( k: \/ x! D( W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 Q5 ]* G  E7 [, y- h/ P<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  i* R( J% y4 `5 w: F# p<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>