【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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; l: T; t$ E) {4 r  n3 J我另将歌词附在此。
% y5 ]- @3 x8 W5 DThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* U+ ^& L8 O  U& OThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 B: i8 o9 b$ \From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
) h+ ^; k' `, WWe meet and talk everyday,
- {" b+ E9 E6 l) I7 ^But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 p: g. l) }) ^5 N7 g0 n2 H* c: JIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( g. Q  T8 {" f& U2 s, W) zLove… just the word love
7 J$ Q- C6 @$ A+ tWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
& u$ A9 L8 U! EBut I never did
" `* J+ x! V$ @' mOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* G0 d. I! t4 W' |: J3 L) cIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
. l, r! {/ c) k" ]+ r+ }Entrust my love within your heart
8 P  v6 A2 N2 n- U+ D- M  RLove… just the word love
+ v4 P3 x' C2 o7 @/ u+ ~$ Y* ~Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- |, K1 x$ ?4 r' c$ TBut I never did
, a1 X2 z% z; i4 k- x: pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( I& P  U' ^( O! c9 Z( vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 P! u7 Y/ d5 p' f2 C5 \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 k, w+ v5 F: o/ K4 M& gCan I entrust it to you?
/ h! Q0 _/ P8 L# p6 X) L0 DEntrust my love within your heart
6 T; R6 a. y/ p" {6 GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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' I# S6 O) i0 C+ }  h<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
. }  j  |6 E! n) }( p! ^<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 G' S- e, O1 z6 \( A6 {<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 n3 ^% }- ?+ |1 z" S( S<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
7 i# G% _& ^! A7 X5 |6 C/ Y' X8 _4 c<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  H" e% I2 Y2 ?" }( k2 c<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 r% F# k2 R, k  `<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 q1 x6 K  p- W! l" w1 Z<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
6 k& W" Y$ Q4 N<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) R# O7 _( v* f" ~* b% {; o<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
7 s5 {4 g$ e( o3 B& F3 T2 l2 Q& l3 H<P>但我不会</P>
# S% l# a8 R% [* R<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; z( }7 ?. L1 V! ]; l- C<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ {8 O# M9 U+ w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, i, O$ y! b( C4 o2 n- d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' ?$ K3 W9 A, Z9 r# o+ Y; h<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- a; Y2 C3 X, [3 {, {* k% ?<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
" Z. T; V* q" }- o! ]<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) J) ^8 n! r/ \/ N! ?# C3 C7 [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 S/ y2 O9 z/ J<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( Y' W6 g" g9 ?% p<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 a. j8 ?8 T8 Z( Z7 y8 q; @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) D7 ~0 w9 ?& @<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" Z% F; r  b* G+ S8 Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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! }# |1 i4 v0 s! c% F& R' U, x这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' @* e! _6 Y: l9 M% F2 p5 K<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ M& t( X; w: G" h' o<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>