【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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% Z& @( T* ~! ~: c: a  z. ^我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, ~3 x& P$ A( K8 w9 aThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 }9 |- r! J5 H6 `. i% X, p$ WFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
' R( U; L1 I) M2 SBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
% c9 q# H$ }, t- I2 KLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ W0 |+ x$ `; q# V+ [  XBut I never did
7 Q" |6 G( v0 U! q3 ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 |0 b/ l5 y- y4 M% k% ~) _If today isn’t too late,
' E; e: M# G# U2 R6 b3 h7 HI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& P3 R* K: a. w" V+ C% X6 k4 D& a& o0 sCan I entrust it to you?
3 t0 b" {, K& P" a) }" |Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
8 S/ P& G6 W( qWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 |( }! C" E  A- o9 s' x5 [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" y7 H% O/ Q+ _Can I entrust it to you?
, \+ A( p/ j6 |$ }/ BEntrust my love within your heart
( ]1 E2 B8 F9 Y0 PCan I entrust it to you?
- @/ p4 M6 a8 oEntrust my love within your heart
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, w( L: y' i3 G4 v3 r/ u7 N* r[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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  \8 D" O2 ?8 c4 ^<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# T9 l! ]2 l  o7 k: d( V' c( T<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 v  F, _' R$ ~: y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 N! V( @# M) r/ h<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! X; B5 o) u( ]4 p3 h<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 Y7 E% R* p3 i0 B, w<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, m$ A; [% X3 ^<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ u& m" n) @& l* k9 N<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- @2 \! \2 V5 @( K9 q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# `& B* `4 ]' b- Q" a4 E- B5 k<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! `: c' ]$ l! x* u, F0 p! V  \<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 `  L" F3 f3 G8 I& Z2 i<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! B9 V( R7 x+ E0 M$ k; ?<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  D. \$ _3 `2 v: N" Y# i! d<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 K$ X- S  z* u- X  t" E- h<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  C& k; j, _( `. H5 d; B$ A<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
/ E5 U* o% R' V) \& _0 i<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! T9 S' F* s( i7 v" O<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; M5 R9 Q. Q2 y7 J# R* `3 T% j<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
" `$ S* B& r) f4 b! j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 ]: u$ ]$ V; P# P1 u<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 N2 ?* q2 U  p0 L6 ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' D, y$ O% x9 J. I1 @/ w/ k<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 k& `) G' A1 M: z" a8 V2 M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 h& B7 c5 l$ B) T' H- u. F* @" M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: a9 i: k/ P5 l; O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 ~5 I1 v; j3 T' |  @8 J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 ]9 s" k, J; @' i/ d! U<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  r, a$ a; r6 x/ \<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 D) j, [" f8 g; G" [<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  G$ C  N% a  E2 L<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; \/ Y6 n, C' a1 h! L7 R0 u<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ U, x5 J& x3 V( D<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* S; g" @! \" M7 V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 q+ M4 |. C% t& q  a9 r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) [4 O- ?/ m; j4 L( m# G' O5 V<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
7 w9 Q. K8 s7 p<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

! m* k; B  h0 u5 r这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' i3 q6 H+ I, x8 m6 b; n' T这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 ]  f8 S& N- J. q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>