【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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( `( v' }: r% O我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
( ?3 R4 o3 y5 _8 r( A( `+ {I already loved you with all my heart
6 r' g6 C1 v* [0 P6 u. D4 j5 Z6 IWe meet and talk everyday,
& _, a! H6 s/ Z& R8 I9 e( C$ VBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- h6 C7 G" E9 DIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
2 U2 O6 P( i" v  Z- b" Y9 JLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 E* _7 Y3 ^+ SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( v! X3 S& T. ~  A. `3 CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ K8 ]2 L7 G0 H; ]2 BCan I entrust it to you?
* Z) G5 T$ X3 z4 GEntrust my love within your heart
- }7 _7 g# f! Q5 R; F+ KLove… just the word love
$ z, z/ _. X8 p8 n: s, IWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, H$ }; ]7 @  Z9 U  b$ F$ c/ wBut I never did
$ P6 F7 m% _# w! ~; YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
! M. e0 `6 J9 l: o" Y: M0 I! m& nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 E: Z- C3 d% j" ]( cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# H7 _" m3 N) a& x5 K! uCan I entrust it to you?
* p( h' G; d4 W* IEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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8 T5 c" ^7 ?8 G6 |, _/ |  F[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% w7 H* `9 \. p" P1 `1 T<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 g+ B% n, s* S0 W. [<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
% R- E' L6 B, }- h' V<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- Q+ a4 W. }4 m3 Z" X! [" x, n<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- W& o. l# R! N! M: g4 I4 p<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 o+ x- J4 p% y  b3 f<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: @$ o9 C: H3 h& R& M- h% r; z0 e' l5 ?<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; R$ D8 G1 q" Z4 `9 R2 w<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& N* L9 L) [; r$ `% t2 j( R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 K# A( O4 c7 y* N: j& Q% G<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 h: E0 T. l) p2 Y- j' |$ S, H7 [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ g# a. M  }* m2 `7 ?<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 _( m7 N' C) [! B: A<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( s) D: T" j* e; @! T<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, O+ U7 W. K4 x7 B+ Q7 e+ v<P>But I never did </P>
) r& t$ e& E) }, E; U* O1 Y1 B<P>但我不会 </P>
- h6 C+ T# l2 x) l1 p5 l3 n<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
1 a4 {) C6 F. A" P1 j& ~<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ @$ Z; R6 x, U6 b  x<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ X4 @* _2 ]  k( |' s<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) I+ {9 `( |# N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" V6 t% F! s$ q, s9 T& f( N, W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) S" T* L5 h; T3 [+ p" j5 O( g# k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 c* {2 a; q' E 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>