【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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" G6 b, r/ ~# s; w( Q/ i. u5 p我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
: C" m( X' K* A' U% M  vI already loved you with all my heart
, z2 o! z- M) k: x* M+ ]We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% E. i2 d  b' V. ~I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
& y- X' c1 z: G  t4 B/ }Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ w7 k7 A% M* }But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 k5 _0 y4 L* o* r( D7 {( h+ qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 y- O; H3 u" @7 J4 |I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 ?, w( p( p: j- M7 @  `% G( NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( L. o) O; ^3 c6 W  W0 `Love… just the word love
" t0 o7 k/ B9 ]/ c% B' Q* JWhy is it so difficult to express?
( v4 a% V, O8 W# v  \, {1 p  Z" d. {I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
  N; e' D2 K- V2 h: MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* W8 I9 N: H! S4 F  V5 WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 ~) R9 `3 i% ^4 jCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

5 }* {8 K' F; L2 D! j1 W5 j[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- B, ^2 n* D$ P9 p* T: T<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ ]9 A* N' |5 z5 W- H' p7 D<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 ?! a/ {8 U2 t# @: L<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 }, J9 ]9 o4 m$ j& n8 g7 M! k<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) `- b# T9 g3 H: l<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 X8 v2 a* Z1 f4 ~<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 g% |. a9 v, x6 m* D( [<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; Y# W8 n" }5 \. r7 D<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, v7 A5 m  m" P/ u' l6 d: m<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 b9 n! m6 H! o' A: Y8 n% X<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& @. i" Y  s' Z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
! g  e: e* i- D, Y! ^<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; I( I2 v5 s9 q5 [2 u: G<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 I5 w4 D0 S) M: [. z7 T0 z3 A' g! y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 [+ Z; V  O8 M! [3 K<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& X  L3 I- ~* [9 }0 X9 K<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 S. w" O; s8 p6 _8 J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 d6 L6 g( \& L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ X; v6 h8 h3 R) |. M( ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. Y4 a0 F3 _% O* I6 z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- O4 i2 C6 S& d, a2 a" T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: M; y- q! P6 e7 H  M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, Z: }& m# L5 k8 K! B<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 l3 f" {/ {% u7 y% a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& J# Q. G. G$ _/ X- z/ I4 M<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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, Z5 y0 [/ n5 ^( O这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 ]- `- Q: Q) v0 L3 U这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ D8 b4 |& u8 o1 L' G<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>