【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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% o5 F4 h% }, d3 ]5 U我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 a# K1 V. m0 Y* LThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 N, g) p. S8 QFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
& Q9 c2 x2 f; [We meet and talk everyday,
3 R' n- Q$ C2 r% F- A. OBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 f: {" l: R/ g; T& tIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ W$ T4 K" h- e5 @I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
) N' n  q7 @0 o5 b- f* R" A2 ?Why is it so difficult to express?
# b  V! `: \* G3 \$ ?$ SI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
/ ^# c8 @/ H7 T4 ?" f2 }Why is it so difficult to express?
1 u3 l2 l+ _; [+ a$ ?6 \I want to confess that I love you,
, C6 H9 ]& L' p! DBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 D5 D6 l5 J+ f  T' uEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
1 X( H9 _0 I, gEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

3 z( e5 _, y5 u2 k/ u
/ n' X, K* g/ F<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, h2 D1 f1 i# `. _" Y+ }% }3 ]<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 f+ B- m, |: X. h<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" _- c7 X! E' D! s<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 ~; @& {7 m, l1 A<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% J) ^5 _, k+ C! c) O: A<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* X6 O5 Y8 B- p! x6 U& K<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" l% {+ i( g& q, o( _<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; [' M7 M% }4 X5 p* k$ J, h<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; \) r+ K: b9 y<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
3 q  R. A, |8 s, O- C& S<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 [" O5 s" j9 V8 q. _1 l3 Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ x9 Y1 F3 \6 x4 W4 N, g; O<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) p* h, K# R- N* p5 ~9 ~( \<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) ]6 s2 v- P0 F' Q. l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 h  Y9 _- D2 c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 }( r0 J5 U( ~) U5 U<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 ?" i$ e3 _0 C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. K5 c7 q5 }: m' |9 U<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# \6 k" N/ W3 b) l0 v4 \4 J<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- Q, Y& }/ y5 Q6 S( C<P>But I never did </P>
- }; t- T8 l1 W, n<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 J) W+ r% o2 m% p( x<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ D  @8 m; W0 Y* U- V" r) z" V4 i<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ S$ Y5 y1 ?6 s& |8 }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# c8 o# H/ C5 F' L6 p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; M1 h! {: P! o& d  v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( L9 w8 p: V$ ?9 ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; \4 @7 H4 |" q/ C: V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 ^& f' [% k" O! r<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 K% p6 r% |2 N7 J6 |  k 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

7 g' w) P/ i1 l3 _; d这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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# ~/ b. U$ }" I& N0 C; |2 y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; o7 E4 U% k0 K- q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 y& @9 U$ [# a4 w/ i, B; }4 z( v<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>