【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 O$ h7 J3 y+ jThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
# |3 P6 Q, ^' XI already loved you with all my heart
9 g( m$ G  h9 r) m6 UWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# k$ Z" y3 g) w. t8 ~- G6 wIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 p( A* n' u% C" f" B3 ?! i$ yI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* b6 c$ i, x; W+ N0 W+ k9 R, ABut I never did
& }) g0 G; k9 e( g7 I, ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 H2 l# O% A0 E4 \4 Z9 UIf today isn’t too late,
4 }7 |9 ~8 _! y+ K- l& zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' G' |$ |( d9 a3 D. xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 v0 R" U. C, c1 S8 kEntrust my love within your heart
: ~8 U2 k% a9 l3 Z; s3 s' JLove… just the word love
- P# [: v3 ^0 sWhy is it so difficult to express?
0 s+ a' s3 O2 w/ bI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 w5 M  a) Q& qIf today isn’t too late,
6 V# o6 z. L% r) pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' r9 C5 }  a# r% n- ]( L1 y, g' \  CCan I entrust it to you?
7 k/ z3 r" E1 [3 |/ \Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
8 b. t& x3 b7 o5 U/ x  [% kEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

. q8 B1 `; F' a+ t1 V, J5 Z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 ?( }' T. s3 X8 R# K<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, j) ]7 p& }' J/ U<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! _. @* w5 x6 K2 W<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 l2 L1 `  z# ^; q4 d<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; z! Q3 B5 V* z7 v: [+ U<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 ~: I% x4 O3 N<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 f& Q4 R0 }; c, m$ d% `) z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) g% d% m  _3 B! ]. w9 K<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 F3 ~) a0 X# p) a<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. U2 J) a6 J! ^, B7 Q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 H% T; d8 O; c& B- d% G<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! C9 c4 a# |7 ^, S<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- p4 Y; z! Z5 R, H3 `3 y% N<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) v8 \- \7 x% z8 X<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 o* d" K  Y( d0 Z1 V! ?1 M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 }4 c  c- f+ A' v! o0 @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& l. s1 J0 T' F+ |, e0 ]<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( r5 l9 L( O2 L2 v7 O! B1 a<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 J  k6 E% M2 l" W9 _3 |' v( l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- P; c3 b+ a5 [+ w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ F8 ?! ^6 E4 N<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
1 e3 @1 \1 G" M<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 f/ g  U. t+ t; x' M: }7 q  U<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 X  P& W1 A/ v$ t) y4 r) v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, F4 l1 X' A: h/ A. S% ^! l1 N+ }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' W0 H- c# ?1 Q, G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ O. u! C( O  k+ i' I, f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' F4 v! |7 O, O3 I/ _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ d# z+ b) v! o" o, X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 d) L$ q) q1 a# [4 H 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
4 G  X, k/ R& z+ @* l
: M7 g; p/ {7 l) A: k1 x这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ j" \" Q3 ^- ?+ r6 K这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ M, r3 T6 ]7 n) y5 B/ i! S<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ r0 h# h/ Z( x<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>