【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
7 `# L. H4 N; c' ?: @1 z7 i1 eThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  T- I2 ]" w' \8 d! U/ \. w1 G; wThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 ?# L  \0 |5 J* U9 q. _From the first moment we met,
- ^; j, ]* T) i" n3 j4 W) {I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
. V# p9 A" h. Y7 H. K5 Q8 ZBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
6 z5 L* `) j' YWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 r4 w( T. p" C1 [I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 X/ g7 \  B4 Q9 D/ p( XIf today isn’t too late,
* X4 S4 I$ v2 a8 [" g( M+ zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" N- D' X0 e0 U( eEntrust my love within your heart
0 A% ?2 N: v9 i% H9 ?Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 @) u* e% d  y4 V+ zI want to confess that I love you,
+ n% C6 k" V& h! t+ [0 {' k+ O, dBut I never did
% K7 w2 n) @* _2 U% x7 F4 tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) R+ V  M$ O1 Z) z3 o" vIf today isn’t too late,
' k' t8 C  h& h* V8 y, sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- y9 l1 M% `# Q0 o5 F+ E, oI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 H- Y1 J6 ?0 }6 [6 ~9 yCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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8 Y# W% {% u* n$ W" n<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ i: g  q+ V; S( F. y# s6 S8 k- Y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 I: j$ M8 V6 D: j8 c<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! H% Q! z+ X" l+ q2 V2 l# k<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 e+ G' ^( A3 D3 ?+ ?" h7 h<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, U* ^! R& H  m- L8 S7 A3 n& N/ O<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 H  L2 S; Y) i, r<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  E  Z) ]  D) o. l% R2 }<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; L, A8 ^9 h) g/ D" T% r<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 S' H& u: |) z( E3 ?% m<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' h" ?% R$ _  m, P4 D<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ b9 E. e& L( s( L  P0 }<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" J( n0 W/ a1 u6 Y& a* b<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 n& j; I8 z7 V8 X5 O<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 v, l4 q: g9 \, L5 ^, k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, t5 ~% P9 h  ~1 f; ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 ^; P* [, h1 k: y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
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<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) Q& D1 x3 U$ k5 Z9 ~: x6 C<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& ?) j+ i- K2 K) k7 o<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 @' }$ G7 c3 [<P>But I never did </P>
' |- D1 T2 X5 L: y0 V<P>但我不会 </P>
1 N, ?0 E/ ^' @" [5 s3 X  |<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% R: P- U/ o+ M! ?/ m2 r3 ]) f' L<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( F6 M6 r) x3 s" g; K<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; J( _/ H1 S+ V- r2 I; f8 j<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 [" X& e7 d: h" l. h1 }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 ~/ i5 f! W- Z; ]+ y) @<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( |: \. u/ j6 q& z  h- v0 V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 X8 z! C; X8 O) O& d" _8 {<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ B6 {6 _3 T- l! E6 }<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

: W! e% ~6 C; c# L' k. a这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 _$ f8 }: }3 k! J2 r<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>