【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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, {9 v, H  `' M7 G+ n我另将歌词附在此。
! a" n. v( p, R, b: O: ZThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ B& J  i- \* \8 I. iThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ x* T5 F, f$ |0 @5 J( Q! L! x  cFrom the first moment we met,
5 m2 ~* O4 M" O  u0 s9 W/ m) WI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
$ R6 a  W" v, N! p( a) c* MBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" t% I2 S$ ~; G" J: n* @If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
: @8 ^' ^8 b$ |" {Love… just the word love
0 I! D) o: v/ Y- w% i8 x0 BWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% V  H& G; j$ c: ]One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' P$ W, w, [& ^$ tIf today isn’t too late,
8 y7 ^8 u1 x* ?* @# _6 {& P) ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# E/ q  B. q$ |9 n2 MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 }( o+ {6 }. f4 ICan I entrust it to you?
% `7 _' `7 k  Q, q$ P5 }Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
: a: H% ~7 D# [0 l8 FI want to confess that I love you,
, ^- X+ F$ s1 m1 UBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; B. W, w) R. DIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* P8 ?/ K: X1 Z/ O% a! e& g$ I" _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
# p2 ~6 i! d6 e. U1 LEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 K% x. ?! q( ?$ Z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 Y$ |8 c4 n# C! M8 H<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 f9 b0 V" _/ ?9 A9 n<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  ?/ D' B) o6 q  g" M) P, A/ T<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- z- Q6 }! w- ~6 h  G<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ G6 W5 ~3 _7 O! e; S<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 T& F! b* P# w/ p<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' \/ r9 D, c% A6 n) m<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* M2 B- t# c; {. V. I$ i<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 r, ~* }) t1 M  b<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( |: b" t) ~7 q5 n, h<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 Q/ \4 k' _5 {1 l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! L2 |( H  ^( n* ~' U' j1 Q  [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 A4 y4 @7 U  F- z* K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ t8 l8 X* w# |: d# \/ O; Z5 q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ y+ x3 |& W9 C: m- l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ t7 `! m/ U/ i& x* W<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 o& E9 R" Y. L. u" s<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 z( f, T2 P0 V<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ _; E/ T- z% g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ W, L' U9 D% Y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; N& N& W- b( f3 {- P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# a: D2 `8 h5 `! b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) L9 p" k$ U) ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 _, z$ s0 g5 B* H2 E<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 N5 H6 }, H) A' ^: ]5 o8 l' s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 m1 Y& T! t  w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 M( ?" `$ Y) m7 L- E<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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. a$ C( I  I* z7 n: r9 s<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>