【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 E" @  s) C  ?! I# L3 kThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 Z" {' c% {. X2 f. H) j1 zFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
! Z( h% Q. x% rWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" _9 a8 i5 o+ _; IIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 l- ^+ A- w4 G, p' xI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' z2 V! H. L. y' mI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 p* P/ w: _' b! }% l* K* dOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 k3 D* r6 v+ g9 h; @; mI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ e0 q  h* q' z5 `9 ^' W$ SLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 h7 `  m% x# C/ M: A' s* j0 G& aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 o- A; }% F5 GIf today isn’t too late,
6 K; N1 p' ~& b4 e* KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! _9 q4 m; I" Y, T4 k0 K8 G2 n$ A% oI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& x( v; |) M7 C6 kCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 t. a6 {% c! A/ ~+ Y  rCan I entrust it to you?
% ^6 x( Y. F( b4 Z& FEntrust my love within your heart

4 U/ [( A( g. f[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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7 I* ?: W0 G& C) w- n& D4 I* O<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
; y& v/ ^/ l( P9 x2 ?9 q9 B: B7 ^2 b<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ l: |/ A8 z1 @. O<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 m" m8 u2 D: l; }+ B/ M7 j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% D% c5 v3 D8 q9 t, G<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. [. w( X8 s5 j% f<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 |; [+ @. K* U. t$ N* @" p<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
# I0 G2 }+ K) I0 l! h% g<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, u" k* e! N" Q. Q$ R<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ y, v3 v7 |1 d4 l# n8 h<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' X* G) b7 s& z$ [9 p<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ @# C8 e! ~* C% d% a<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 R* N6 t9 }% L, u1 A, b/ w<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- |6 B* r# L; b( Z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 P- I. B* @3 E+ k$ k. h( ~<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
( u& m* _" \6 y# e* N) U+ V. O  A<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; K. g2 l) R5 `, [( \0 v& Y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 k7 \- E5 t. j* K3 x$ s/ O" `5 \0 C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) }9 ]8 a8 W' H6 ?% g' o5 x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: r6 ?$ Q0 q4 O2 t( ?: w7 `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; {3 U7 o7 n9 [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: f* M; c$ c% g: b; V<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* s) n7 I8 A2 w0 n: e1 @<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 I; ~3 I# I. t" R: c- Y4 u( N<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
) A, F# ]2 T. \6 B6 o) P<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 R# `0 c2 C: }; T<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 b( b# K2 D% \& {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ w% R# P$ Z' R1 T9 h<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" B- O. j0 j: W6 ]" F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  Y+ J) \$ v6 y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# |* ]: t# E1 n" F5 @4 S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' I& Y. ^4 G9 D' @- c! u9 t, Q9 w<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% q' C7 D$ y0 B( V6 j6 O 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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  P$ u, b* }4 X. t, w* D- n+ B/ s这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

( j5 B6 n* p2 ?) W5 M这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 i9 Q9 T6 d' T0 y1 t- p7 r+ i5 n<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>