【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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; O7 B( B% ^4 E我另将歌词附在此。
: v. i$ l; T8 O2 s: j9 y$ [$ wThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 ]1 Z8 K" d5 aFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
3 g5 I) U. ~. ^5 u( w8 I3 fWe meet and talk everyday,
9 Y- W, [( l3 l6 w' l! \# p( kBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 N% T7 l" e; f3 m( BIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* W- A& i: o' ?% O& X7 _2 KI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
) o) O# m7 \( a! k' v; [# RWhy is it so difficult to express?
! X8 [: ~9 g9 P8 L6 N- TI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
$ O4 b8 e4 ^/ ~3 h( ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 Q1 B* `+ v9 [3 r0 v$ I1 I2 uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 o' e* P3 H- L+ w+ Q, v2 ^1 k& JLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" E0 T6 t6 c: L) LI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% S) G/ P: c5 `1 v4 f. N# F" }% @/ }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 u7 x* V$ j8 q# _/ nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 u0 S- j, J/ s5 o9 cCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 S! i2 ~( `. ^- E' p! E4 |8 m5 JCan I entrust it to you?
( f- D8 v8 V' D, e1 iEntrust my love within your heart
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6 \* o$ s1 V6 k) C! R$ k, B[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

5 G: K& W; F+ O+ c, `<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# L1 m1 X' |# x* k$ m<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 |4 s+ I& P& e4 t: O! v<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" f" N  L! o* R0 a5 \8 K<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: b# Z3 N4 j0 c! L% X4 o: S3 e8 W<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. t, @2 M7 B, I<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 M0 @" M7 Z1 X, G1 [<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
! G- t& \' c9 E( q3 h: j" \* \8 x<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 [; m' c* a& ^/ U* S<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 a8 G) {3 m. H9 _" T4 K<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: V# P/ x( a/ I) _0 O: Q' ?) R<P>但我不会</P>
) y6 D7 ]# N) [/ M: j; R! J<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. L" K. C9 j0 J. g9 C. K<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" e: o! J& s# ~1 _<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 ~3 v4 ?& V, D<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 B$ n! `+ ^  T0 x9 _3 t" B<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ t/ n8 Q: |/ c# q" ~* Y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. u1 C) x" o" \, B. z9 [" c( C- P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ H! x! K+ |& f5 r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 b6 N( ?" M- h" c& Q. X2 D2 w; z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* \, o3 z1 E9 t  s6 O; B<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ D$ A) Z, {2 b$ M0 |<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* }! R8 O" b$ ^* i  R" Q<P>But I never did </P>
+ M7 A+ A2 ]0 x. g<P>但我不会 </P>
0 e- o4 u8 L& T<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& W) {+ X9 o6 x/ S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# z: G" \2 _0 a- H<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! b. R, Y3 j, k8 H, N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. |8 D3 v- F3 \" w4 D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ o8 g: X7 g  T+ x8 F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, x' W9 B$ a8 z, p" ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! D* D$ i2 p$ c6 ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  @: T2 v2 K3 R9 J! j. p& ?<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' ^' @" ]( n8 W, h  A4 G; X& H这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 E# P1 t5 w% m7 {; u4 {- ^<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>