【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& V, p% ]. v' J! MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& E) e% Y" s8 Y8 NWith the moon kissing it every night
9 n$ a3 q4 [3 m6 Z6 x8 R$ F) zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. P: a5 ?0 z8 Z5 v; o; |/ KEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ m! K4 f& n/ L" f% w2 H) JNothing can compare to my love
; B1 m1 G8 I) y5 H! V+ h( ~, oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 m- d0 X/ y, H% jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 t* F8 R6 r& m1 r$ E* kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 }" Q) V1 l# ^* d  f( B6 d7 gWith such a tongue as yours,
( ^: _9 E5 n/ l' ?/ F& nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 `9 i9 T& x2 x5 l6 q( AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 l, r$ C3 S) R, [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 e" Z9 u$ `$ P8 n( n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 x/ a# `2 q6 x- ~, {$ ]& k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) }9 F2 V6 h; i5 P( A" Y. h% p5 q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 c4 b9 J0 a: j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 Y) E$ a9 l* l9 X! k6 l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. ]& n% A7 [: j# t4 n8 x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( h- F7 }2 t! R. u1 g  o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ r0 ?% [2 T' l5 L) h- u2 [6 y9 b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* [) k! }& V& Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& S; X  @* x  S. ^2 D  ]: e- W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 @$ u5 |- i: i" c. C: n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# X) B; w$ Y  {5 J/ \0 @/ t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, [2 J) Y* K0 Z; ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# l$ T' D) z2 A% o' X" F- @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 B) s3 P) p, ]: j: @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 p$ u0 p& N6 o4 V- Z8 c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% g$ F, o7 e. A0 F/ _; N% l  n; j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* c+ @# y; H( G7 U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ g7 ?8 i) L7 u; m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 Z/ }% J, w/ U. b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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