【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. z& B$ N( y1 z" x- O0 `7 P歌词我附在后面。
) V8 g5 ]- k8 \& e6 M  ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
& q1 p" f! L' G+ K' a  B8 c! oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: l; {9 e  [( R6 E0 v1 F% IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 \9 B% |* R. T8 Z$ c- l9 @3 yThe sky is happy down to its soul
, o( X; m  O3 j/ rWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# U1 h" v1 @6 ~% N" \+ ^( V, xYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 J1 m% b( t) Y6 gI really want to know just how much you love me
. j5 B% ?, T6 K. D" l& C- @7 bI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 A# o" \8 F0 n) Z% Y( ?, {/ yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, E3 o5 N! Z( N  ]1 k* B5 Z% II regret not dying
) t( j$ {/ u9 s3 p& J6 Y- GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 [4 {# M) A3 ?6 WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 a" E0 |6 y. g8 [/ q5 ~/ @. sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# ^. B0 U7 Q8 \. Z* y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ o# T+ Y! X  E' H+ v. a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 a+ P* ]  u# j: {' g3 f. C8 [) L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 }2 e8 I" i. f% R0 v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 a1 h, y; s4 P0 ]6 a( ~4 l* m8 e$ d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 Z8 a) j! Y* t9 }' I- Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# ~) I$ d8 m. r/ D# n: Q1 a" C, B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) W/ b* f# G# S# k, g1 K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 L6 C" J4 N3 V( U# L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! |6 D9 s% J% U' ?: B/ f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 H5 Y4 I- w/ W/ w8 n: M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. b* s4 J! S& _0 x1 e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 H/ v- }# Z) G* ?! U$ ?4 }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 H9 ?$ _# b4 U% u  J! z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 i. F5 S" k+ ?' W3 i& l8 T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. X  G. V& N; g$ i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ r3 E' U( r" E2 J' S' n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% j/ \! m  U* m% @1 z$ Q0 Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 x- ?- y, S6 v- ?' i( X/ K! I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 }* N5 {0 e( M+ H& M- W5 F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( z& E6 B. s! e' l; l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 u4 E# i1 l' P6 L# p* ~& J" j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 {/ h7 x9 A  N2 F$ n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% S8 H2 U1 ]* c8 g- W! X; \  D5 q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& S: ^* X! T1 }1 f9 ~" Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: ]5 \5 k  f3 |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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% v' k6 K1 ~# ^7 O5 i% L% ]7 u6 ~+ d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  ^% @1 A) R+ w4 g  @: w0 O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>