【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! K( t8 c2 w. `The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 C* M2 f( K' k3 }2 O3 @8 ~* m  T1 E6 r; yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ s1 M7 U& o: N/ y- J; E$ ?4 fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! B; @. `4 y" A; W! BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 W6 }9 P  g4 c& wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ n6 n8 w2 ]- r( RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" y! k  M. n" ~  m) }8 eEvery other word you utter is love
5 [  J1 e5 w2 `& y6 k) oI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ Q8 E! y( E# K- }, t& K& d; DNothing can compare to my love
( N$ z( ?" P6 A# a0 tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  [4 `: U$ z  G$ E; ~I’m still filled with fear
, K, C1 Y' k; ~; ~, g7 [# L; TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; r; m/ ]7 d. w1 c$ M' A2 LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  l1 b1 {0 C1 s2 m& U1 D5 c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: Y+ z& N3 Y* M; t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 I+ L0 P" ~; E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, {4 j% l* q; U1 g$ U1 |: U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 s; m6 [5 W$ C; {3 k0 ~! y' x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 w2 ~6 P* x1 H1 A. J# m+ I: |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 F! A* J) [# P% k- n% ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# E' x  X% S4 o3 f0 `6 P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 M3 m( r9 z0 F<P>你无需担心</P>
7 C" O; ?3 ?* y* J$ w, t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* T5 L- g& a+ q; a' \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 {7 ]0 @. m6 e' y: V( p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 F7 t9 v( [' e1 S/ c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 @  a; j1 B& X% b( e1 ^$ r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 o$ P7 T- w* w" N, q) ~/ J% Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" M" F$ P/ K2 }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. T- j/ N2 Z7 u2 `1 R, b  P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. l; k" ^" o5 ~6 T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" X* |; i! ^. e  g% f9 `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& k% Y' m1 r, q1 _% U1 L) w6 n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( w+ V. d2 V  T, S, C$ N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' q$ O5 l! z! E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 E: _  O1 \3 `' n, z3 G; |5 l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% `. s% B% n8 `: v2 `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' b& c5 z& L5 e! P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! m' X- s2 B; ]5 {7 A; }5 J7 w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% \  ~7 Q' F8 `  c8 e: f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 }" n1 a; x7 I& G. @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 Y4 Z" Q+ ~$ B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 `+ L! u; q0 g* p9 U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* ~  v1 C, Q/ C( o<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ B0 f: ~0 X3 V# g3 i$ M* F我请你剖开它

& R: B. e3 n5 n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>