【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 _! `) S) i5 mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ ^& k; F' \; K* N& |- P( IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# V% E6 |, _& x: T8 |; n* SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 ~: |# H- D8 Y- h0 `" T! K. l9 Y) F" zThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 R5 P( F8 B: a  T  k/ tYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, u, n0 h7 Y* R. i4 Z8 }I love you I love you with all my heart
2 D: a- R5 [1 FNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) L; R- f: ^- m+ r8 MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 X; R0 a, N4 @2 ]& V4 ZI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# _5 E6 U$ U% A7 R2 FI regret not dying
7 `/ O/ }  O2 u& f# n4 sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 E" l: O9 S  ?! xWith such a tongue as yours,
; w5 j- E( J% _2 r$ z5 L3 pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 }: ]3 q2 P+ {2 u' z8 a0 MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 C! O* s; i/ s9 B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! S: n% A& U% d  N% F  Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; l/ g  ], T: R" E7 d5 G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, S; D9 g# t+ Z, J3 v. a5 W& a5 y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' o- J$ Y; [4 Q3 B3 P; f! I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 e" W( C7 T; x1 u+ d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 ?6 y, ]; Y2 x& b, L" K. j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  R, F# t  |9 E4 m# r, B& P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! g8 O: z9 o# H" j' o  n" Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& N9 Q! |; I! L. W) B0 D<P>你无需担心</P>
7 u+ c; d4 ?' e0 T" ?' {: \2 Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& @* N$ A, g6 H1 I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% v3 i; Q; U$ j6 N2 v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: c- ~- g  w7 a9 w3 J* K& ]5 e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 _1 L6 _' d. q5 ~  j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 e# E9 y" X0 [; T6 Y. V: ]: m7 c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ e# U. d7 R. @* |: `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 k1 y7 @' ?2 H7 h2 j. \0 U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, w' G, D9 |2 x' x) S7 a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& `' t7 v& ]: l- z8 }! ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ W+ N# P  H: N* ~1 ~  h( n: `* m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 L5 D! }+ C" U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# Q; g) T& ~, @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ y% J3 O! `; D, B2 y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* c1 w, n; p0 S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 H4 N3 c4 d, `/ j" Y* k0 E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 w, j# O1 {# o# q: [5 D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 d% u2 S8 y( e0 c- Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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% L  v( V- I, b- x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>