【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  ?2 Y; B7 m; }( t2 YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& o# w" [7 f# J/ r8 Y1 r6 u# eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! u/ c0 K6 N% o1 QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 g5 M) [' A2 Z* V5 rWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 q  c! Q; x& h% XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ {* J3 D; T+ R' n: L2 [& D, AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 }1 y" Q1 S! i9 w6 v3 YI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 S: c1 R# v( I0 K4 TNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( @3 f5 k1 p1 t( c. A0 bI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 N% A$ [- G: ]" y# rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 @! @4 H4 s6 b, q5 X' {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; b5 O/ ]# A% `1 Z1 Z: Y( dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  G2 H4 G' L! M6 \' s# F) q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 h+ E5 K) ?$ m8 a2 X- |: \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 }, z& |, ], n9 M5 G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 }, i( V5 \$ b, m7 h: g1 {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" b4 d# O( K4 I: M$ w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, r  @, `, A; k% K! r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( s8 ]9 c* q. _: y: @* I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: Z5 q$ t7 ]0 I$ p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 `4 M$ M) z1 u& {5 x/ G: J<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ Y: w* z) b8 x7 ~* s: j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 v9 }5 G3 ?) c7 d& K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 U* T. y$ J) y7 \8 K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 }' `1 u, G  K* c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 B+ `" x% y! Z' ^5 l6 Z; g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 A5 c- G* m2 \4 d' a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  z: \( R/ ?- c) J, |0 a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ U  _" C$ f- K. h# x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- t# u4 Z, v: q9 m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 C" s2 _& O/ Z$ X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; L* x; o: o9 Z% k5 K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; S8 ]* N% w- H0 ~) }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 `9 i) F: H# U: N3 h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 \' Z( G2 n7 D0 s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" V- m* {2 v4 r  o% Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 F5 B, ]9 j& r: n2 K9 D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 P' I& x8 j. O  W) G2 K, J  I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 R8 K/ ?# p' Y& _" [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* X6 _. w2 C/ u# f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
& i+ s, L' `4 O
  m% a6 d$ I, F, a* F1 e9 b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>