【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
7 ~$ B& b+ y  Y# \5 [4 p- dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 o* {" z% A  N! e# J0 V' u9 l  \Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 B! N$ a/ [/ pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 l7 v! \# @4 H( C7 I, DWith the moon kissing it every night
. |, D4 u) v3 g, k. O' j) QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 e/ J! R, B1 h* h2 _5 d0 ]2 PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# j5 F) o0 u1 I7 q2 G9 U; f  `7 ?Every other word you utter is love
# O8 V8 C* {2 II really want to know just how much you love me
- F6 ~9 g7 Q- v: U' ~2 tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' y6 K2 U5 ~2 @0 wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& F! Y  e- _$ R4 M6 K$ u6 CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( o; l6 K7 i' a2 E0 ]I’m still filled with fear
  T  u4 B4 Z6 lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 _* s* K( _" \$ e0 X3 w% ^. b3 }I regret not dying
- n2 y  K1 ?- k+ x( s- lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( [, k  p. T1 \% H- d1 m4 Q( a  M3 ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 |1 J0 f2 e! TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 m& O9 T8 V( {2 y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 M  P! K, d/ d3 B; `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 k' h" ~9 }0 |9 |8 Q) q9 {  l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 i) o4 z& ^  V1 q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) ~# I$ a1 q$ O4 `4 K' M4 [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 ]9 e% Q  E" ?9 h( X9 c$ Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! B' S8 z: I: ]) z0 V! Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 r5 V6 p) e- r! z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ W* |2 `" \, H1 i, q# P9 B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 G4 Z1 {4 B* q# I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ k9 ^9 I  v! h+ H' H! Q  N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ ?0 f1 K7 l$ D% T8 L; S: R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 x& Y! f; h( S& G7 U# Z$ a1 t4 F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ M- Z" I# M/ }0 g  h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 }! o1 i9 ?! L" G$ ^' m1 I' Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- N+ p, }5 s  m8 E! {! m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 L/ P" `- r: y% i3 R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# _2 o$ p- W; v2 }2 {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 M  ^% [$ `3 h5 p6 b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; m" M& }7 f! K5 G% B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 V; k( }  j  E' L" S( O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 I- z) U) B! d6 M, {% i% M+ |( m- ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. ]" ^! V( ]/ D+ d! Y" o/ r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# m+ e* g3 z0 I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, o8 f- \4 {1 n  ]' E8 N8 r7 G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 L% R6 M) y( D! S0 @' a4 l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 ?1 n6 T& ~3 J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 u1 R5 a! [: b8 m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( m5 j3 I  |9 B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# I! F- }# e$ p- ~6 r  e( ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>